SBS- Seoul Broadcasting System or Special Broadcasting Service?

Hello,

I have here a poem/story.

I have a question though, which is about the end if you would like to comment and or edit!

Note:
(pause) is silent in the poem.

Should I say: I can say yes or no and she knows if I want to hear it or not. It gets to be, too much sometimes.

or

I can say yes or no and she knows if I want to hear it. It gets to be, too much sometimes.

Draft one format continually changing, for today anyway.

Please let me know what you all think!

SBS-
Seoul Broadcasting System or Special Broadcasting Service?

I like oranges Period or comma?
juice in general.
Target spreads-
Archery only.
My roommate
(pause)
on the other hand, is SBS
(pause)
Australian or South Korean.
You pick.
(pause)——–

she likes elephants

and stories that are doubtfully authentic-
Apocryphal. (said solidly)

                     

We have gotten to the point
where, if she says apocryphal,
I can say yes or no and she knows if I want to hear it.

It gets to be, too much sometimes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Written by Sam Sutlive on February 8, 2017 in the evening

Rewritten here on February 10, 2017 at 8:45pm and (between 8:45 and 9:01pm, working out the kinks of the code I found for the columns, still messing with codes and moving codes around between 9:01 and 9:55pm, end edits and code moving at 9:55pm for February 10, 2017).

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